Tuesday, May 13, 2014

Sentence correction from first paper

If they had just done this in the beginning I would have been well on the road to my recovery and saved them a lot of money on ineffective treatments, the government wastes enough money as it is.


I would have been well on the road to my recovery, and saved them a lot of money on ineffective treatments; if they had just done this in the beginning. The government wastes enough money as it is.

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